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PostSubject: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:07 am

Pilot Episode first, to attract an audience.

Try to come up with a plot for this episode (Please note that this series has different thing happening in this episode, like Tom & Jerry) This episode should be 5 minutes or more. I want the writers to show me what they got, SOLDJA!

Here's some Ideas:

-Pancake thinks the universe is going to "End", and nobody except for the other Platoons believe him. (Lunch, Dinner, and Desert freak out)
-Dinner Platoon comes up with a ray that turns things into chocolate, while the Breakfast Platoon is doing their current mission on planet Erifrats, the Pizza aims the gun at Pancake but BabyBackRibs messes up his aim and shoots Strudel by accident, making Cereal go mad.

You can post suggestions and I'll put it up in the poll of ideas, to see which one we like best.
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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:35 am

Here's the general outline I use when writing plots....


Title:
Goal:
Music (Optional)

Characters:
Mood/Theme of Piece:
Moral/End Story:

Story (Detailed)

Act I, II, III, IV, V, etc...

Animation (Act I, II, III, IV, V, etc...):
Script/meaning (Act I, II, III, IV, V, etc...):
Music (Optional):

Dunno if it's useful to you guys writing the plots, but I always find it useful when working on animations. (Several of which I really need to work on....darn you Minecraft. :P)

Anyhow, good luck with the story writing! Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:47 am

Thanks, and I'll keep that in mind.

I love your new name CX
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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 10:45 am

I can help with the small details in the story I guess...

I believe the viewers would like to know how Pancake found out about the end of the world. :P

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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 2:02 pm

Title: Failstronauts pilot episode (?)
Goal: Hmmm...I'll keep thinking (The platoons are at war already, right?)
Music: I'm not the music operator

Characters: (Main characters I guess)
Mood/Theme of Piece: THE UNIVERSE IS ENDING IN A FUNNY RANDOM WAR-LIKE WAY
Moral/End Story: I have no idea...maybe a "To be continued"

Story: Basically what frostie said, where the Platoons think the universe is gonna end. (And maybe they have some battles or something)

Act I, II, III, IV, V, etc...

Animation (Act I, II, III, IV, V, etc...): Frostie can think of this stuff
Script/meaning (Act I, II, III, IV, V, etc...): I'll think of some funny puns and word play, and a kinda established storyline when I can
Music (Optional): The music people do this
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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 2:11 pm

Dark_Plague wrote:
I can help with the small details in the story I guess...

I believe the viewers would like to know how Pancake found out about the end of the world. :P

I had an idea that he get's a laptop for "Free" and started to look for missions to do and he happened to read an article on "End of the universe"
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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 2:57 pm

I believe the first episode should explain the whole thing.
Like explain "Failstronauts", and why it was created, who they're enemies are, and who the heroes are.

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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 3:45 pm

Pilot episodes are usually something that would be aired in the middle of the series, so we can put that in episode 1.
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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 3:47 pm

Pilot Episodes are usually the first episode. o.o

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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 3:56 pm

Not in my book.
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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:13 pm

Just googled "Pilot Episode".
It means the first episode. Wink

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Basically, a Pilot episode is the first airing of that show, it's made WEEKS ahead of the rest of the series to see if a wide audience likes it and to make changes to the cast if someone doesn't like that actor or the setting or the general basics of the show specifically.

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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:48 pm

What about the adventure time pilot? It wasn't a series yet.
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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:59 pm

Oky, I no argue.


But this doesn't mean I'm saying that I'm wrong. :D

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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 5:39 pm

:P

Okay then, so scripts take some planning.

So any more ideas?
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PostSubject: Re: Pilot Episode *THIS IS IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 5:59 pm

Did you like any part of mine?

Edit: I agree with Dark, we need a Pilot episode, establishing the Failstronauts are, and a basic beginning war.
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