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PostSubject: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 09, 2011 3:15 am

Submit your ideas for episode 1, then I'll make a discussion thread about it.

Idea 1: Pancake purchases a computer, he looks for missions on it and reads that one of them says "THE UNIVERSE IS ENDING". He thinks that Dinner team is behind it.
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 6:17 pm

Can you explain why the Platoons are at war so I can write up some stuff?
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 6:25 pm

They're not all at war, lemme explain.

The breakfast Platoon is like a captain and crew that completes missions to help other planets and such.
The dinner Platoon wants power in the galaxy, but stall around and decides to make the breakfast Platoon fail at their missions.
The lunch Platoon is put to even out the score between the dinner and breakfast Platoon, like they could shoot missiles at both dinner and breakfast.
Desert Platoon just wants to party and hang out, they sometimes come in and make dinner Platoon fail their missions.
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 6:59 pm

Okay, basic storyline:

The BP (Breakfast platoon) people get a SOS call from a Dry, dying, planet. They send out on a mission to save them.

The DP1(Dinner platoon) hears of this mission and comes to attack.

On the planet, the dying people get resources from the BP. All is well! Until the DP1 come! A pizza shaped ship comes down and Razor pepperoni slices attack the people. The BP attacks the DP1 ship, yet the BP ship is broken, and crashes.

The DP1 Thinks they've won and begin celebrating. Babybackribs messes up, and the DP1 ship, falls to their doom in the dryland.

The BP helps clean up, when they realize They can't get home because of ship damage. They begin repairs as they hang out in the city a bit.

After a while, the ship is fixed and they launch off. Half way home, the LP (Lunch Platoon) Decides to try to settle the score and damages the BP ship. Stranded in space, the BP is sad and helpless. Just then, the DP2 (Dessert platoon) flies by seeing the depressing ship, and they come aboard to PARTEH!

Then during the party, a BP person (Choose one) Sees one of the plasma columns used for PARTEH lighting has the parts needed to fix navigation, and plasma coils to fix the engines. The repairs begin, the DP2 party guys leave, and the BP ship returns successfully to their world, and report their mission the the home-world commanders.

The BP people decide to come more prepared next time they go in space, so the DP1 people can't hurt them as badly.

The sad, injured, DP1 people have ice packs help to their heads and such, swearing to their cloaked, mysterious, unknown, leader with glowing red eyes, that they will to better. The deep mysterious voice from there leader says: "FINE YOU IDIOTS. But next time, at least get me a body or something as a prize. Or everyone of you IMBECILES will be punished. "Yes my lord." Says Porkchop.

Fade away with intense music...




YOU LIKE? It'll have more detail, but this is the basic idea for now
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 16, 2011 7:49 pm

I liek.
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:54 pm

Should it be the pilot? Or should it be a draft thingy....?
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sun Jul 17, 2011 3:16 pm

Different episode.
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:20 pm

We should introduce the characters in the first episode.

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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Tue Jul 26, 2011 9:53 pm

Yes.
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Wed Jul 27, 2011 12:23 pm

We're workin' on the first episode, I think introducing them should just be kinda hinting their personalities and having as many of them talk as possible.

PM me scene 3 when you're done frostie, then I'll do scene 4 and we'll both work on the ending.

Also we should have a theme song, where it shows the main characters and who is the voice, and the say like: "Music by: ***" And "Backrounding by: ***" And "writing by: ***" Then Created by: FrostiePancake (With the Failstronauts symbol with all the characters in the back at the same time)

Then at the end we'll do the longer boring credits without pictures.
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Fri Jul 29, 2011 1:47 am

I'm animating the credits and opening sequence, but I desperately want to use vocaloid and UTAU songs. Here's an idea:

Opening: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8qNF7GvmV3M
Ending: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EsZKJD-6S4k

Both catchy tunes, best part is UTAU is freeware and you can use the songs, along with vocaloid.
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:37 am

Some music that you might wanna think about for Opening and Closing Credits. :P
http://c418.bandcamp.com/album/72-minutes-of-fame
Listen to "Welcome Back To The Machine"

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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:02 pm

It's free, right?
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:27 pm

Will some of the characters have best buds? I'm just wondering..
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sat Jul 30, 2011 5:25 pm

I dunno, probably.
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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sun Jul 31, 2011 9:47 pm

I posted that music just to show you what kind of style that some of the music should have.
Oh and, do you like all those songs? :D

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PostSubject: Re: Episode 1: *IN PROGRESS*   Sun Jul 31, 2011 9:59 pm

Yesh, they had a cool feel to them.

But I think that kinda goes in the music section.

I really liked the song "I like my job" kinda fitting with the title! XD
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